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posted by [identity profile] ellethill.livejournal.com at 01:30pm on 09/09/2010
I loved this fic to bits and BEYOND, every part of it! Holy shit, the way everything connected, and the pacing, and the tone, and SAM! and GABRIEL! Oh my god, their interaction was perfect! and Dean getting hit by a clue-by-four and his serious face and the pulling of hair! And the awesome, fantastic way in which girl!Sam is at the same time all Sam /and/ a real live girl, not just boy!Sam with breasts - s/he's everything I'd ever want in a gender-bending fic!

But I think what struck me to most was how nicely and naturally you built up to the statement that Sam keeps swallowing her words; and not trying to sound technical here, because what the hell do I know, but that meld right there between showing and telling is probably one of the most seamless I've ever seen :)
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posted by [personal profile] twentysomething at 07:27pm on 09/09/2010
Thank you so much for this lovely comment! I have this terrible addiction to genderbending, so I'm happy you at least think I'm doing it well!

\blushing\ Thank you, again. It makes me all dopey when people compliment my writing!
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