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posted by [personal profile] logicandlove at 11:45am on 03/04/2011
this is so, so fantastic. i love the way you describe things; your diction and flow are really great. i feel like i want to say more but i'm hours past bedtime, so that's all i can do for now. :P wonderful job! ♥
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posted by [personal profile] twentysomething at 04:02pm on 03/04/2011
Thank you! I was hours past bedtime myself when I posted it, haha, I was just like AUGH GET ON THE INTERNET, OKAY, FIC? But thank you for commenting, even when it was past your bedtime, too!
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posted by [personal profile] logicandlove at 12:28am on 04/04/2011
i remembered a thing i wanted to say! i loved how you touched on each of her past boyfriends (well, the ones we know) in a way that obviously compared those relationships with what she has with ben and showed this time around is clearly the best and he is The One, etc. but it was subtle and gracious enough to not fall into negativity or spite. i thought that was very well played. :)

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