twentysomething

I can't quite put my finger on exactly what you did, but the way you wrote this is brilliant. It reads like a stream of consciousness, or a journal page. It reads like Gabriel wrote this story!
That's what I've been trying to say. I just spent like 10 minutes typing and backspacing, trying to say something, and that's all I meant to say. It reads like Gabriel wrote it. Perfect. Thank you.